Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and simple message

[Carl Trieloff]

want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome

Carl.



On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote:
> Hi,
> The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear:
> "Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and Management
> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center".
>
> "Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology.  "Infrastructure and
> Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not sure
> what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is.
>
> Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better.
>
> This tagline is used in the <h2> and <title> (shortened).  It's
> important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and whether
> to read more.  How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source
> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"?
>
> Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra at ovirt.org and
> board at ovirt.org.
>
> Stefan
>
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