Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and simple message

[Alexander Graf]

Am 12.01.2012 um 23:32 schrieb Anthony Liguori <aliguori at us.ibm.com>:

> On 01/12/2012 03:53 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
>> oVirt - the virtual datacenter management platform
>> 
>> Provision, manage and monitor hypervisors and virtual machines
> 
> Perhaps the tag line should be more KVM centric?
> 
> Provision, manage and monitor virtual machines in the KVM hypervisor.

Provision, manage and monitor KVM? Whoever comes to oVirt will hopefully know which kvm we're talking about :)

Alex

> 
> Regards,
> 
> Anthony Liguori
> 
>> 
>> ----- Original Message -----
>>> 
>>> want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome
>>> 
>>> Carl.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote:
>>>> Hi,
>>>> The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear:
>>>> "Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and
>>>> Management
>>>> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center".
>>>> 
>>>> "Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology.
>>>>  "Infrastructure and
>>>> Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not
>>>> sure
>>>> what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is.
>>>> 
>>>> Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better.
>>>> 
>>>> This tagline is used in the<h2>  and<title>  (shortened).  It's
>>>> important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and
>>>> whether
>>>> to read more.  How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source
>>>> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"?
>>>> 
>>>> Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra at ovirt.org and
>>>> board at ovirt.org.
>>>> 
>>>> Stefan
>>>> 
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