Almost ready to go public

[Ayal Baron]

----- Original Message -----
> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
> > Looking good.  I have a problem with the fact that there is no
> > agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target
> > audience is.  Without this I believe we will get less attendees.
> >
> > Spelling/grammar issues:
> >
> > "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join in
> >  launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” project."
> >
> > s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ ?
> >
> > "1stth - 3rd"
> > get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing
> >
> > s/(source)/(source code)/
> >
> > s/site, forums/site and forums/
> >
> > s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/
> >
> > s/  Open sourcing it's virtualization/  Open sourcing its
> > virtualization/
> 
> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it
> 
> Carl.
> 

Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated.