From aliguori at us.ibm.com Thu Jan 12 17:32:14 2012
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From: Anthony Liguori <aliguori at us.ibm.com>
To: board at ovirt.org
Subject: Re: Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and	simple
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Date: Thu, 12 Jan 2012 16:32:07 -0600
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On 01/12/2012 03:53 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
> oVirt - the virtual datacenter management platform
>
> Provision, manage and monitor hypervisors and virtual machines

Perhaps the tag line should be more KVM centric?

Provision, manage and monitor virtual machines in the KVM hypervisor.

Regards,

Anthony Liguori

>
> ----- Original Message -----
>>
>> want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome
>>
>> Carl.
>>
>>
>>
>> On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote:
>>> Hi,
>>> The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear:
>>> "Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and
>>> Management
>>> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center".
>>>
>>> "Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology.
>>>   "Infrastructure and
>>> Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not
>>> sure
>>> what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is.
>>>
>>> Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better.
>>>
>>> This tagline is used in the<h2>  and<title>  (shortened).  It's
>>> important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and
>>> whether
>>> to read more.  How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source
>>> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"?
>>>
>>> Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra(a)ovirt.org and
>>> board(a)ovirt.org.
>>>
>>> Stefan
>>>
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