From stefanha at linux.vnet.ibm.com Sat Jan  7 05:31:29 2012
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From: Stefan Hajnoczi <stefanha at linux.vnet.ibm.com>
To: board at ovirt.org
Subject: Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and simple message
Date: Fri, 06 Jan 2012 21:32:20 +0000
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Hi,
The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear:
"Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and Management
Virtualization Platform for the Data Center".

"Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology.  "Infrastructure and
Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not sure
what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is.

Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better.

This tagline is used in the <h2> and <title> (shortened).  It's
important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and whether
to read more.  How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source
Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"?

Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra(a)ovirt.org and
board(a)ovirt.org.

Stefan


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