From abaron at redhat.com Thu Jan 12 16:53:03 2012 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="===============0532624774589116583==" MIME-Version: 1.0 From: Ayal Baron To: board at ovirt.org Subject: Re: Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and simple message Date: Thu, 12 Jan 2012 16:53:02 -0500 Message-ID: In-Reply-To: 4F0F2753.8@redhat.com --===============0532624774589116583== Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable oVirt - the virtual datacenter management platform Provision, manage and monitor hypervisors and virtual machines ----- Original Message ----- > = > want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome > = > Carl. > = > = > = > On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote: > > Hi, > > The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear: > > "Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and > > Management > > Virtualization Platform for the Data Center". > > > > "Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology. > > "Infrastructure and > > Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not > > sure > > what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is. > > > > Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better. > > > > This tagline is used in the

and (shortened). It's > > important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and > > whether > > to read more. How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source > > Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"? > > > > Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra(a)ovirt.org and > > board(a)ovirt.org. > > > > Stefan > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Board mailing list > > Board(a)ovirt.org > > http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board > = > _______________________________________________ > Board mailing list > Board(a)ovirt.org > http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board >=20 --===============0532624774589116583==--