From alinefm at linux.vnet.ibm.com Fri Jul 3 08:40:09 2015 Content-Type: multipart/mixed; boundary="===============9086467722045505395==" MIME-Version: 1.0 From: Aline Manera To: kimchi-devel at ovirt.org Subject: Re: [Kimchi-devel] [PATCH 2/2] Review changes for Kimchi Date: Fri, 03 Jul 2015 09:39:56 -0300 Message-ID: <5596829C.5080904@linux.vnet.ibm.com> In-Reply-To: 1435704502-8836-1-git-send-email-kersten@us.ibm.com --===============9086467722045505395== Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On 30/06/2015 19:48, Kersten wrote: > Made changes to 3 files per comments from Aline. > > Signed-off-by: Kersten > --- > ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita | 30 +++++++++++++++--------------- > ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita | 8 ++++---- > ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita | 15 +++++++++------ > 3 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita b/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests= .dita > index 7d0d453..45cf7da 100644 > --- a/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita > +++ b/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita > @@ -10,14 +10,14 @@ https://w3.opensource.ibm.com/projects/dita-cshelp/--> > > Guests > The Guests page lists the defined > -guests or virtual machines. > +guests for your server. > >

For each guest, the following information is displayed:

>
Name
> -
Name of the virtual machine.
> +
Name of the guest.
> >
CPU
> -
Percentage of processor utilization in the virtual machine.
> +
Percentage of processor utilization in the guest.
> >
Disk I/O
>
Disk input/output transmission rate in KB per seconds.
> @@ -53,16 +53,16 @@ existing guest. Guests can be edited only while stopp= ed. >
  • Select Power Off to force an immediate > shut down of the guest.
    • >
  • Select Delete to delete the guest.
    • > -To create a guest, or virtual machine, click the plus > -(+) icon on the page.

    > +To create a guest, click the plus (+) icon > +on the page.

    > > > -Create a guest (virtual machine) > +Create a guest > Create a guest by using an existing template. > >

      > -
    1. Type the name to be used to identify the virtual machine.
      2. > -
    2. Select a template.
        > +
      • Type the name to be used to identify the guest.
        • > +
      • Select a template.
          >
        • If templates exist, select from displayed templates.
          • >
        • If no templates exist, click Create a template to > create a template.
          • > @@ -73,9 +73,9 @@ create a template. > > > Edit guest > -Edit the properties of an existing virtual machine. Some > -properties can be edited only while guest is stopped. Others will > -take effect in next boot. > +Edit the properties of an existing guest. Some properties > +can be edited only while guest is stopped. Others will take effect > +in next boot. > >
          >
          General
          > @@ -124,11 +124,11 @@ guest. > iSCSI volumes or if the target pool does not have enough space, the > clone will be created on a default storage pool. >
    > -

    A guest appears in your list with the label "cloning..." When the > -process is complete, the cloned guest is available to use.

    -Caret 54?> > +

    A guest appears in your list with the label Cloning... When > +the process is complete, the cloned guest is available to use.

    +Caret 45?> >     >     > > > - > + > diff --git a/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita b/ui/pages/help/en_US/stora= ge.dita > index e6f995d..53d1404 100644 > --- a/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita > +++ b/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita > @@ -94,16 +94,16 @@ pool is created, it will be created for you. > > > Add volume > -Adds volume to a storage pool. > +Adds volume to a storage pool. > >
    >
    Fetch from remote URL
    > -
    Specifies a location to upload the volume from. For example: https://my-server/fedora22.img.
    > +
    Specifies a location to download the volume from. For example: https://my-server/fedora22.img.
    >     >
    Upload a file
    >
    Specifies a location on your local system.
    > -
    > +
    >     >     > > - > + > diff --git a/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita b/ui/pages/help/en_US/tem= plates.dita > index 1c03016..ad3747c 100644 > --- a/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita > +++ b/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita > @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ You can select multiple networks. >
    In the CPU Number field, specify the number > of processors that are defined for the template.
    >
    Select to Manually set CPU topology for each guest.
    > - > + > > > > @@ -69,16 +69,19 @@ ISO image to 'ISO' storage pool for following discove= ry. >
    Select to scan storage pools for installation ISO images available > on the system.
    > > +
    Local Image File
    > +
    Select to specify a path to the local image file.
    > +     >
    Remote ISO image
    >
    Select to specify a remote location for an installation ISO image.<= /dd> > > > > > -Add template - local ISO image > -Add a template from a local ISO image. > +Add template - ISO image > +Add a template from a ISO image. > > -

    The ISO images available on the system are displayed.

    > +

    The ISO images available on the system ore remotely are displayed.

    Just a typo here 'ore' but I can fix is before applying. >
    >
    OS
    >
    Name of the operating system or distribution.
    > @@ -105,7 +108,7 @@ specify a path to the ISO image. > ISO images. > > > - > + > > > - > + --===============9086467722045505395==--