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On 09/19/2011 05:34 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:

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On 09/19/2011 05:26 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:

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On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:

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On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:

Looking good.  I have a problem with the fact that there is
no
agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the
target
audience is.  Without this I believe we will get less
attendees.

Spelling/grammar issues:

"Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to
join
in
 launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt”
 project."

s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt"
project./
?

"1stth - 3rd"
get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing

s/(source)/(source code)/

s/site, forums/site and forums/

s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/

s/  Open sourcing it's virtualization/  Open sourcing its
virtualization/

I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate
it

Carl.

Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated.

I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also.

Carl.

Still older version ("November 1th" etc).

try now.

It's corrupt now (256b instead of ~200K)

it's good for me, try do a page refresh and then a download so you
get
the updates html source link

Carl.

http://www.ovirt.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Ovirt-WorkShop-Invitation.pdf
????
(still broken for me)