Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target audience is. Without this I believe we will get less attendees. Spelling/grammar issues: "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join in launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” project." s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ ? "1stth - 3rd" get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing s/(source)/(source code)/ s/site, forums/site and forums/ s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its virtualization/ ----- Original Message -----
All corrected. New PDF uploading
Carl.
On 09/19/2011 02:43 PM, Itamar Heim wrote:
http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/workshop-invitation/
s/Are interested in an Open virtualization management platform?/Are you.../ s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already) s/CA,USA/CA, USA/
" The project will kickoff with a workshop meeting during (November 1-3rd)" Why parenthesis around the dates?
http://lists.ovirt.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Ovirt-WorkShop-Invitatio n.pdf page 1 s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already)
Page 2 s/Vitalization/Virtualization/
Page 3 s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already)
Page 11 s/Nogah/oVirt/ (2 occurrences)
page 24 s/Nogah/oVirt/ s/have its/have their/
page 25 s/are no limit/is no limit/
-----Original Message----- From: project-planning-bounces@ovirt.org [mailto:project-planning-bounces@ovirt.org] On Behalf Of Carl Trieloff Sent: Monday, September 19, 2011 18:39 PM To: project-planning@ovirt.org Subject: Almost ready to go public
I have updated the website, the PDF invitation and the e-mail invitation. Please take a quick look and see if my last pass through fix ups are good.
I have shortened the tease on the e-mail invite a little and posted it in addition to the PDF on the resources page: http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/
The site has been updated with logistics. If we are all good, I'll sync with Ralf and we can start turning it public later today.
Mail out any issues, thx.
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