Almost ready to go public

[Carl Trieloff]

On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
> Looking good.  I have a problem with the fact that there is no agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target audience is.  Without this I believe we will get less attendees.
>
> Spelling/grammar issues:
>
> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join in
>  launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” project."
>
> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ ?
>
> "1stth - 3rd"
> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing
>
> s/(source)/(source code)/
>
> s/site, forums/site and forums/
>
> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/
>
> s/  Open sourcing it's virtualization/  Open sourcing its virtualization/

I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it

Carl.