Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and simple message

Karsten 'quaid' Wade kwade at redhat.com
Wed Jan 18 17:48:00 EST 2012


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On 01/18/2012 12:14 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
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> 
> oVirt - the virtual datacenter management platform
> 
> Provision, manage and monitor hosts, hypervisors and virtual
> machines
> 
> Driving the KVM ecosystem to the next level

Small but important change, the serial lists need to have a final
comma so the last items in the list are properly separated. So:

"Provision, manage, and monitor hosts, hypervisors, and virtual machines"

- - Karsten
- -- 
name:  Karsten 'quaid' Wade, Sr. Community Architect
team:    Red Hat Community Architecture & Leadership
uri:              http://communityleadershipteam.org
                         http://TheOpenSourceWay.org
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