Re: Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and simple message

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----- Original Message ----- > > want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome > > Carl. > > > > On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote: >> Hi, >> The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear: >> "Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and >> Management >> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center". >> >> "Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology. >> "Infrastructure and >> Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not >> sure >> what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is. >> >> Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better. >> >> This tagline is used in the<h2> and<title> (shortened). It's >> important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and >> whether >> to read more. How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source >> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"? >> >> Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra(a)ovirt.org and >> board(a)ovirt.org. >> >> Stefan >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Board mailing list >> Board(a)ovirt.org >> http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board > > _______________________________________________ > Board mailing list > Board(a)ovirt.org > http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board > _______________________________________________ Board mailing list Board(a)ovirt.org http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board