Re: Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and simple message

On 01/12/2012 03:53 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: > oVirt - the virtual datacenter management platform > > Provision, manage and monitor hypervisors and virtual machines Perhaps the tag line should be more KVM centric? Provision, manage and monitor virtual machines in the KVM hypervisor.

Regards, Anthony Liguori > > ----- Original Message ----- >> >> want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome >> >> Carl. >> >> >> >> On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote: >>> Hi, >>> The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear: >>> "Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and >>> Management >>> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center". >>> >>> "Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology. >>> "Infrastructure and >>> Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not >>> sure >>> what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is. >>> >>> Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better. >>> >>> This tagline is used in the<h2> and<title> (shortened). It's >>> important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and >>> whether >>> to read more. How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source >>> Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"? >>> >>> Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra(a)ovirt.org and >>> board(a)ovirt.org. >>> >>> Stefan >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Board mailing list >>> Board(a)ovirt.org >>> http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Board mailing list >> Board(a)ovirt.org >> http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board >> > _______________________________________________ > Board mailing list > Board(a)ovirt.org > http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board > _______________________________________________ Board mailing list Board(a)ovirt.org http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board