want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome
Carl.
On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote:
Hi,
The tagline on
ovirt.org is long and unclear:
"Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and Management
Virtualization Platform for the Data Center".
"Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology. "Infrastructure and
Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not sure
what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is.
Something shorter would communicate what
ovirt.org is about better.
This tagline is used in the <h2> and <title> (shortened). It's
important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and whether
to read more. How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source
Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"?
Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra(a)ovirt.org and
board(a)ovirt.org.
Stefan
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