Re: Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and simple message

want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome Carl. On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote: > Hi, > The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear: > "Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and > Management > Virtualization Platform for the Data Center". > > "Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology. > "Infrastructure and > Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not > sure > what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is. > > Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better. > > This tagline is used in the <h2> and <title> (shortened). It's > important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and > whether > to read more. How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source > Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"? > > Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra(a)ovirt.org and > board(a)ovirt.org. > > Stefan > > _______________________________________________ > Board mailing list > Board(a)ovirt.org > http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board _______________________________________________ Board mailing list Board(a)ovirt.org http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/board