
oVirt - the virtual datacenter management platform Provision, manage and monitor hypervisors and virtual machines ----- Original Message -----
want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome
Carl.
On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote:
Hi, The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear: "Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and Management Virtualization Platform for the Data Center".
"Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology. "Infrastructure and Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not sure what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is.
Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better.
This tagline is used in the <h2> and <title> (shortened). It's important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and whether to read more. How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"?
Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra@ovirt.org and board@ovirt.org.
Stefan
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