Re: Infra project mission statement RFC

On Tue, 2012-07-10 at 16:09 -0400, Mike Burns wrote: > On Tue, 2012-07-10 at 21:58 +0200, Ewoud Kohl van Wijngaarden wrote: > > On Tue, Jul 10, 2012 at 03:49:54PM -0400, Robert Middleswarth wrote: > > > On 07/10/2012 03:48 PM, Mike Burns wrote: > > > >On Tue, 2012-07-10 at 15:27 -0400, Robert Middleswarth wrote: > > > >>This week in the infra meeting the topic of a mission statement was > > > >>talked about and I was asked to send out some suggestions and ask for > > > >>feedback and combine the comments into a good mission statement. I > > > >>tired to take what was talked about in the chat and looked at mission > > > >>statements of other projects and this is what I came up with. > > > >> > > > >>Proposed Mission Statement: > > > >> > > > >>The Infrastructure (infra) team is a community services infrastructure > > > >>team. It purpose is to manage in a professional manner the oVirt's > > > >>project infrastructure following accepted professional standards of > > > >>system administrators. These administrators volunteer their time to > > > >>contribute to the oVirt project. > > > >A few nits and reorganizations... > > > > > > > >The infra team is a community services infrastructure team made up of > > > >volunteers. It purpose is to manage, in a professional manner, the oVirt > > > >project's infrastructure following accepted professional standards of > > > >system administrators. > > > I like that one better :) > > Provided you change 'It purpose' to 'Its purpose' I mostly like it. Not > > sure about the double professional in there. What's the difference > > between a professional manner and following accepted professional > > standards? Maybe make it modern professional standards as well. > > I missed the double professional. Not sure how modern fits there. It > seems to make it a bit wordy... > > The infra team is a community services infrastructure team made up of > volunteers. It purpose is to manage the oVirt project's infrastructure > following accepted professional standards of system administrators. Fixing It -> Its The infra team is a community services infrastructure team made up of volunteers. Its purpose is to manage the oVirt project's infrastructure following accepted professional standards of system administrators.