On Tue, 2012-07-10 at 16:09 -0400, Mike Burns wrote:
On Tue, 2012-07-10 at 21:58 +0200, Ewoud Kohl van Wijngaarden wrote:
> On Tue, Jul 10, 2012 at 03:49:54PM -0400, Robert Middleswarth wrote:
> > On 07/10/2012 03:48 PM, Mike Burns wrote:
> > >On Tue, 2012-07-10 at 15:27 -0400, Robert Middleswarth wrote:
> > >>This week in the infra meeting the topic of a mission statement was
> > >>talked about and I was asked to send out some suggestions and ask for
> > >>feedback and combine the comments into a good mission statement. I
> > >>tired to take what was talked about in the chat and looked at mission
> > >>statements of other projects and this is what I came up with.
> > >>
> > >>Proposed Mission Statement:
> > >>
> > >>The Infrastructure (infra) team is a community services infrastructure
> > >>team. It purpose is to manage in a professional manner the oVirt's
> > >>project infrastructure following accepted professional standards of
> > >>system administrators. These administrators volunteer their time to
> > >>contribute to the oVirt project.
> > >A few nits and reorganizations...
> > >
> > >The infra team is a community services infrastructure team made up of
> > >volunteers. It purpose is to manage, in a professional manner, the oVirt
> > >project's infrastructure following accepted professional standards of
> > >system administrators.
> > I like that one better :)
> Provided you change 'It purpose' to 'Its purpose' I mostly like it.
Not
> sure about the double professional in there. What's the difference
> between a professional manner and following accepted professional
> standards? Maybe make it modern professional standards as well.
I missed the double professional. Not sure how modern fits there. It
seems to make it a bit wordy...
The infra team is a community services infrastructure team made up of
volunteers. It purpose is to manage the oVirt project's infrastructure
following accepted professional standards of system administrators.
Fixing It -> Its
The infra team is a community services infrastructure team made up of
volunteers. Its purpose is to manage the oVirt project's infrastructure
following accepted professional standards of system administrators.
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