Tagline on ovirt.org does not communicate a clear and simple message

[Ayal Baron]

oVirt - the virtual datacenter management platform

Provision, manage and monitor hypervisors and virtual machines

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> 
> want to take a hack at improving it, all improvements welcome
> 
> Carl.
> 
> 
> 
> On 01/06/2012 04:32 PM, Stefan Hajnoczi wrote:
> > Hi,
> > The tagline on ovirt.org is long and unclear:
> > "Complete and Comprehensive Open Source Infrastructure and
> > Management
> > Virtualization Platform for the Data Center".
> >
> > "Complete and Comprehensive" is almost a tautology.
> >  "Infrastructure and
> > Management Virtualization Platform" does not make sense, I'm not
> > sure
> > what a "Management Virtualization Platform" is.
> >
> > Something shorter would communicate what ovirt.org is about better.
> >
> > This tagline is used in the <h2> and <title> (shortened).  It's
> > important because this is how visitors learn what oVirt is and
> > whether
> > to read more.  How about shortening it to, "Complete Open Source
> > Virtualization Platform for the Data Center"?
> >
> > Thanks to mburns on #ovirt for directing me to infra at ovirt.org and
> > board at ovirt.org.
> >
> > Stefan
> >
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