Almost ready to go public
Carl Trieloff
cctrieloff at redhat.com
Mon Sep 19 21:43:03 UTC 2011
On 09/19/2011 05:34 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
>
> ----- Original Message -----
>> On 09/19/2011 05:26 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>>> On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
>>>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>>>>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
>>>>>>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no
>>>>>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target
>>>>>>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less
>>>>>>> attendees.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Spelling/grammar issues:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to
>>>>>>> join
>>>>>>> in
>>>>>>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt”
>>>>>>> project."
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt"
>>>>>>> project./
>>>>>>> ?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> "1stth - 3rd"
>>>>>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> s/(source)/(source code)/
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its
>>>>>>> virtualization/
>>>>>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate
>>>>>> it
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Carl.
>>>>>>
>>>>> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated.
>>>> I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also.
>>>>
>>>> Carl.
>>>>
>>> Still older version ("November 1th" etc).
>>
>> try now.
> It's corrupt now (256b instead of ~200K)
>
it's good for me, try do a page refresh and then a download so you get
the updates html source link
Carl.
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