Almost ready to go public
Ayal Baron
abaron at redhat.com
Mon Sep 19 21:34:58 UTC 2011
----- Original Message -----
> On 09/19/2011 05:26 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> >> On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
> >>> ----- Original Message -----
> >>>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
> >>>>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no
> >>>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target
> >>>>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less
> >>>>> attendees.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Spelling/grammar issues:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to
> >>>>> join
> >>>>> in
> >>>>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt”
> >>>>> project."
> >>>>>
> >>>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt"
> >>>>> project./
> >>>>> ?
> >>>>>
> >>>>> "1stth - 3rd"
> >>>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing
> >>>>>
> >>>>> s/(source)/(source code)/
> >>>>>
> >>>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/
> >>>>>
> >>>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/
> >>>>>
> >>>>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its
> >>>>> virtualization/
> >>>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate
> >>>> it
> >>>>
> >>>> Carl.
> >>>>
> >>> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated.
> >> I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also.
> >>
> >> Carl.
> >>
> > Still older version ("November 1th" etc).
>
>
> try now.
It's corrupt now (256b instead of ~200K)
>
> Carl.
>
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