Made changes to 3 files per comments from Aline. Signed-off-by: Kersten <kersten@us.ibm.com> --- ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita | 30 +++++++++++++++--------------- ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita | 8 ++++---- ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita | 15 +++++++++------ 3 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-) diff --git a/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita b/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita index 7d0d453..45cf7da 100644 --- a/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita +++ b/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita @@ -10,14 +10,14 @@ https://w3.opensource.ibm.com/projects/dita-cshelp/--> <cshelp id="kimhvirtm" xml:lang="en-us"> <title>Guests</title> <shortdesc>The <wintitle>Guests</wintitle> page lists the defined -guests or virtual machines.</shortdesc> +guests for your server.</shortdesc> <csbody> <p>For each guest, the following information is displayed:<dl><dlentry> <dt>Name</dt> -<dd>Name of the virtual machine.</dd> +<dd>Name of the guest.</dd> </dlentry><dlentry> <dt>CPU</dt> -<dd>Percentage of processor utilization in the virtual machine.</dd> +<dd>Percentage of processor utilization in the guest.</dd> </dlentry><dlentry> <dt>Disk I/O</dt> <dd>Disk input/output transmission rate in KB per seconds.</dd> @@ -53,16 +53,16 @@ existing guest. Guests can be edited only while stopped.</li> <li>Select <uicontrol>Power Off</uicontrol> to force an immediate shut down of the guest.</li> <li>Select <uicontrol>Delete</uicontrol> to delete the guest.</li> -</ul>To create a guest, or virtual machine, click the <uicontrol>plus -(+)</uicontrol> icon on the page.</p> +</ul>To create a guest, click the <uicontrol>plus (+)</uicontrol> icon +on the page.</p> </csbody> <cshelp id="kimhvirtmcrt" xml:lang="en-us"> -<title>Create a guest (virtual machine)</title> +<title>Create a guest</title> <shortdesc>Create a guest by using an existing template.</shortdesc> <csbody> <p> <ol> -<li>Type the name to be used to identify the virtual machine.</li> -<li rev="rev1">Select a template. <ul> +<li>Type the name to be used to identify the guest.</li> +<li>Select a template. <ul> <li>If templates exist, select from displayed templates.</li> <li>If no templates exist, click <uicontrol>Create a template</uicontrol> to create a template.</li> @@ -73,9 +73,9 @@ create a template.</li> </cshelp> <cshelp id="kimhvirtmedit" xml:lang="en-us"> <title>Edit guest</title> -<shortdesc>Edit the properties of an existing virtual machine. Some -properties can be edited only while guest is stopped. Others will -take effect in next boot.</shortdesc> +<shortdesc>Edit the properties of an existing guest. Some properties +can be edited only while guest is stopped. Others will take effect +in next boot.</shortdesc> <csbody> <dl><dlentry> <dt>General</dt> @@ -124,11 +124,11 @@ guest.</li> iSCSI volumes or if the target pool does not have enough space, the clone will be created on a default storage pool. </note></li> </ol> -<p>A guest appears in your list with the label "cloning..." When the -process is complete, the cloned guest is available to use.</p><?Pub -Caret 54?> +<p>A guest appears in your list with the label <uicontrol>Cloning...</uicontrol> When +the process is complete, the cloned guest is available to use.</p><?Pub +Caret 45?> </csbody> </cshelp> <?tm 1391540919 3?> </cshelp> -<?Pub *0000005359?> +<?Pub *0000005287?> diff --git a/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita b/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita index e6f995d..53d1404 100644 --- a/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita +++ b/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita @@ -94,16 +94,16 @@ pool is created, it will be created for you.</li> </cshelp> <cshelp id="kimhdefstor" xml:lang="en-us"> <title>Add volume</title> -<shortdesc>Adds volume to a storage pool.</shortdesc><?Pub Caret 0?> +<shortdesc>Adds volume to a storage pool.</shortdesc> <csbody> <dl><dlentry> <dt>Fetch from remote URL</dt> -<dd>Specifies a location to upload the volume from. For example: <filepath>https://my-server/fedora22.img</filepath>.</dd> +<dd>Specifies a location to download the volume from. For example: <filepath>https://my-server/fedora22.img</filepath>.</dd> </dlentry><dlentry> <dt>Upload a file</dt> <dd>Specifies a location on your local system.</dd> -</dlentry></dl> +</dlentry></dl><?Pub Caret 57?> </csbody> </cshelp> </cshelp> -<?Pub *0000004413?> +<?Pub *0000004416?> diff --git a/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita b/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita index 1c03016..ad3747c 100644 --- a/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita +++ b/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ You can select multiple networks.</dd> <dd>In the <uicontrol>CPU Number</uicontrol> field, specify the number of processors that are defined for the template.</dd> <dd>Select to Manually set CPU topology for each guest.</dd> -</dlentry></dl><?Pub Caret 322?> +</dlentry></dl> </csbody> </cshelp> <cshelp id="kimhaddtempl"> @@ -69,16 +69,19 @@ ISO image to 'ISO' storage pool for following discovery.</shortdesc> <dd>Select to scan storage pools for installation ISO images available on the system.</dd> </dlentry><dlentry> +<dt>Local Image File</dt> +<dd>Select to specify a path to the local image file.</dd> +</dlentry><dlentry> <dt>Remote ISO image</dt> <dd>Select to specify a remote location for an installation ISO image.</dd> </dlentry></dl> </csbody> </cshelp> <cshelp id="kimhaddloct"> -<title>Add template - local ISO image</title> -<shortdesc>Add a template from a local ISO image.</shortdesc> +<title>Add template - ISO image</title> +<shortdesc>Add a template from a ISO image.</shortdesc> <csbody> -<p>The ISO images available on the system are displayed.</p> +<p>The ISO images available on the system ore remotely are displayed.</p> <dl><dlentry> <dt>OS</dt> <dd>Name of the operating system or distribution.</dd> @@ -105,7 +108,7 @@ specify a path to the ISO image.</li> ISO images.</li> </ul></li> </ul> -</csbody> +</csbody><?Pub Caret -2?> </cshelp> </cshelp> -<?Pub *0000004089?> +<?Pub *0000004194?> -- 1.9.5.msysgit.1