On 02/10/2014 10:14 PM, Christy Perez wrote:
Some suggestions below. :)
Thanks, Christy! Always good to have
a native speaker going through what
we write. :)
Best regards,
Leonardo Garcia
On Mon, 2014-02-10 at 00:35 -0200, Leonardo Garcia wrote:
> From: Leonardo Garcia <lagarcia(a)br.ibm.com>
>
> Signed-off-by: Leonardo Garcia <lagarcia(a)br.ibm.com>
> ---
> docs/README.md | 13 +++++++++++++
> 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+)
>
> diff --git a/docs/README.md b/docs/README.md
> index 9c7c188..8433a69 100644
> --- a/docs/README.md
> +++ b/docs/README.md
> @@ -4,6 +4,10 @@ Kimchi Project
> Kimchi is an HTML5 based management tool for KVM. It is designed to make it
> as easy as possible to get started with KVM and create your first guest.
>
> +Kimchi runs as a daemon on the hypervisor. It manages KVM guests through
"on the hypervisor host" (since it doesn't run *on* the actual
hypervisor)
> +libvirt. The management interface is accessed through the web using an HTML5
> +powered browser.
"is accessed over the web using a browser that supports HTML5."
> +
> Browser Support
> ===============
> Desktop Browser Support:
> @@ -24,6 +28,15 @@ that preceded it. For example, if the current version of a browser
is 24.x, we s
> 23.x versions.This does not mean that kimchi cannot be used in other browsers,
however, functionality
> and appearance may be diminished and we may not be able to provide support for any
problems you find.
>
> +Hypervisor Distro Support
> +==============
> +
> +Kimchi daemon might run on any GNU/Linux distribution that sufices the
Instead of suffices, use "meets."
> +conditions described on the 'Getting Started' section below.
> +
> +However, the Kimchi community is usually making tests with the latest version of
"The Kimchi community makes an effort to test with the latest versions
of"
> +Fedora, RHEL, OpenSuSe, and Ubuntu.
> +
> Getting Started
> ===============
>
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