Re: Almost ready to go public

On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: > Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no > agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target > audience is. Without this I believe we will get less attendees. > > Spelling/grammar issues: > > "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join in > launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” project." > > s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ ? > > "1stth - 3rd" > get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing > > s/(source)/(source code)/ > > s/site, forums/site and forums/ > > s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ > > s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its > virtualization/ I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it Carl.