Re: Almost ready to go public

----- Original Message ----- > On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >> ----- Original Message ----- >>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no >>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target >>>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less attendees. >>>> >>>> Spelling/grammar issues: >>>> >>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join >>>> in >>>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” >>>> project." >>>> >>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ >>>> ? >>>> >>>> "1stth - 3rd" >>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing >>>> >>>> s/(source)/(source code)/ >>>> >>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/ >>>> >>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ >>>> >>>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its >>>> virtualization/ >>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it >>> >>> Carl. >>> >> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated. > I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also. > > Carl. > Still older version ("November 1th" etc).