Re: Almost ready to go public
Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no agenda which makes it
really hard to understand who the target audience is. Without this I believe we will get
less attendees.
Spelling/grammar issues:
"Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join in
launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” project."
s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ ?
"1stth - 3rd"
get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing
s/(source)/(source code)/
s/site, forums/site and forums/
s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/
s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its virtualization/
----- Original Message -----
All corrected. New PDF uploading
Carl.
On 09/19/2011 02:43 PM, Itamar Heim wrote:
> http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/workshop-invitation/
>
> s/Are interested in an Open virtualization management platform?/Are
> you.../
> s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already)
> s/CA,USA/CA, USA/
>
> " The project will kickoff with a workshop meeting during (November
> 1-3rd)"
> Why parenthesis around the dates?
>
>
> http://lists.ovirt.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Ovirt-WorkShop-Invitatio
> n.pdf
> page 1
> s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already)
>
> Page 2
> s/Vitalization/Virtualization/
>
> Page 3
> s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already)
>
> Page 11
> s/Nogah/oVirt/ (2 occurrences)
>
> page 24
> s/Nogah/oVirt/
> s/have its/have their/
>
> page 25
> s/are no limit/is no limit/
>
>
>
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: project-planning-bounces(a)ovirt.org
> [mailto:project-planning-bounces@ovirt.org] On Behalf Of Carl
>> Trieloff
>> Sent: Monday, September 19, 2011 18:39 PM
>> To: project-planning(a)ovirt.org
>> Subject: Almost ready to go public
>>
>>
>>
>> I have updated the website, the PDF invitation and the e-mail
>> invitation. Please take a quick look and see if my last pass
>> through fix
>> ups are good.
>>
>> I have shortened the tease on the e-mail invite a little and
>> posted it
>> in addition to the PDF on the resources page:
>> http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/
>>
>> The site has been updated with logistics. If we are all good, I'll
>> sync
>> with Ralf and we can start turning it public later today.
>>
>> Mail out any issues, thx.
>>
>> kind regards
>> Carl.
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