Re: Almost ready to go public

On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: > ----- Original Message ----- >> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no >>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target >>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less attendees. >>> >>> Spelling/grammar issues: >>> >>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join >>> in >>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” >>> project." >>> >>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ >>> ? >>> >>> "1stth - 3rd" >>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing >>> >>> s/(source)/(source code)/ >>> >>> s/site, forums/site and forums/ >>> >>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ >>> >>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its >>> virtualization/ >> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it >> >> Carl. >> > Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated. I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also. Carl.