Re: Almost ready to go public

On 09/19/2011 05:26 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: > > ----- Original Message ----- >> On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>> ----- Original Message ----- >>>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no >>>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target >>>>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less >>>>> attendees. >>>>> >>>>> Spelling/grammar issues: >>>>> >>>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to >>>>> join >>>>> in >>>>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” >>>>> project." >>>>> >>>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" >>>>> project./ >>>>> ? >>>>> >>>>> "1stth - 3rd" >>>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing >>>>> >>>>> s/(source)/(source code)/ >>>>> >>>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/ >>>>> >>>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ >>>>> >>>>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its >>>>> virtualization/ >>>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate >>>> it >>>> >>>> Carl. >>>> >>> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated. >> I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also. >> >> Carl. >> > Still older version ("November 1th" etc). try now.

Carl.