Re: Almost ready to go public

On 09/19/2011 05:34 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: > > ----- Original Message ----- >> On 09/19/2011 05:26 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>> ----- Original Message ----- >>>> On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>>> ----- Original Message ----- >>>>>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>>>>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is >>>>>>> no >>>>>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the >>>>>>> target >>>>>>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less >>>>>>> attendees. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Spelling/grammar issues: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to >>>>>>> join >>>>>>> in >>>>>>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” >>>>>>> project." >>>>>>> >>>>>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" >>>>>>> project./ >>>>>>> ? >>>>>>> >>>>>>> "1stth - 3rd" >>>>>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing >>>>>>> >>>>>>> s/(source)/(source code)/ >>>>>>> >>>>>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/ >>>>>>> >>>>>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ >>>>>>> >>>>>>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its >>>>>>> virtualization/ >>>>>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate >>>>>> it >>>>>> >>>>>> Carl. >>>>>> >>>>> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated. >>>> I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also. >>>> >>>> Carl. >>>> >>> Still older version ("November 1th" etc). >> >> try now. > It's corrupt now (256b instead of ~200K) > it's good for me, try do a page refresh and then a download so you get the updates html source link Carl.