Re: Almost ready to go public

----- Original Message ----- > On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no >> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target >> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less attendees. >> >> Spelling/grammar issues: >> >> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join in >> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” project." >> >> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ ? >> >> "1stth - 3rd" >> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing >> >> s/(source)/(source code)/ >> >> s/site, forums/site and forums/ >> >> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ >> >> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its >> virtualization/ > I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it > > Carl. > Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated.