I went over (I believe) the latest PDF and have these notes for changes. Replacement text is in "", simple search replace sed-style. == page 2 == Drop "" around oVirt. Use bold to emphasize. (In American usage "" = uncertainty.) "The project will kickoff November 1st through 3rd with a meeting and workshop that is open to all who want to use, learn about, or get involved with the comprehensive open virtualization management platform." "The sessions cover the technical sub-projects, governance, getting involved, usage, and much more. Full source code repositories, project site, forums, and so forth will launch at the event." "If you have any interest in an open virtualization management platform you need to be there!" == page 3 == (Should be:) http://www.ovirt.org/news-and-events/workshop/ == page 6 == "Tremendous interest in open virtualization throughout ..." s/etc/etc./ == page 7 == * "Superior performance, scalability, and security." * s/OPEN/open/ == page 8 == * "The goal is to create a vibrant community where platforms, features, and interfaces are designed and implemented today and in to the future." * "The project is seeded ..." * "Open sourcing its virtualization management assets (RHEV)." * "From partners, customers, and competitors to build ..." == page 11 == * "... used by oVirt Engine or other applications ..." == page 13 == * "Including hypervisor, engine, API, and GUI" * s/eg./e.g./g == page 14 == s/eg/e.g./ == page 18 == s/it's/its/ s/api's/APIs/ == page 21 == * "oVirt is now one of the projects it is able to promote." * "... focused and works on implementation and definition of KVM solutions." == page 22 == * "... can be seen as complementary in the same way ..." == page 24 == s/oVirt engine/oVirt Engine/ s/sub-projects/projects/ -- name: Karsten 'quaid' Wade, Sr. Community Gardener team: Red Hat Community Architecture & Leadership uri: http://communityleadershipteam.org http://TheOpenSourceWay.org gpg: AD0E0C41