[Kimchi-devel] [PATCH 2/2] Review changes for Kimchi
Kersten
kersten at us.ibm.com
Tue Jun 30 22:48:22 UTC 2015
Made changes to 3 files per comments from Aline.
Signed-off-by: Kersten <kersten at us.ibm.com>
---
ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita | 30 +++++++++++++++---------------
ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita | 8 ++++----
ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita | 15 +++++++++------
3 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)
diff --git a/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita b/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita
index 7d0d453..45cf7da 100644
--- a/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita
+++ b/ui/pages/help/en_US/guests.dita
@@ -10,14 +10,14 @@ https://w3.opensource.ibm.com/projects/dita-cshelp/-->
<cshelp id="kimhvirtm" xml:lang="en-us">
<title>Guests</title>
<shortdesc>The <wintitle>Guests</wintitle> page lists the defined
-guests or virtual machines.</shortdesc>
+guests for your server.</shortdesc>
<csbody>
<p>For each guest, the following information is displayed:<dl><dlentry>
<dt>Name</dt>
-<dd>Name of the virtual machine.</dd>
+<dd>Name of the guest.</dd>
</dlentry><dlentry>
<dt>CPU</dt>
-<dd>Percentage of processor utilization in the virtual machine.</dd>
+<dd>Percentage of processor utilization in the guest.</dd>
</dlentry><dlentry>
<dt>Disk I/O</dt>
<dd>Disk input/output transmission rate in KB per seconds.</dd>
@@ -53,16 +53,16 @@ existing guest. Guests can be edited only while stopped.</li>
<li>Select <uicontrol>Power Off</uicontrol> to force an immediate
shut down of the guest.</li>
<li>Select <uicontrol>Delete</uicontrol> to delete the guest.</li>
-</ul>To create a guest, or virtual machine, click the <uicontrol>plus
-(+)</uicontrol> icon on the page.</p>
+</ul>To create a guest, click the <uicontrol>plus (+)</uicontrol> icon
+on the page.</p>
</csbody>
<cshelp id="kimhvirtmcrt" xml:lang="en-us">
-<title>Create a guest (virtual machine)</title>
+<title>Create a guest</title>
<shortdesc>Create a guest by using an existing template.</shortdesc>
<csbody>
<p> <ol>
-<li>Type the name to be used to identify the virtual machine.</li>
-<li rev="rev1">Select a template. <ul>
+<li>Type the name to be used to identify the guest.</li>
+<li>Select a template. <ul>
<li>If templates exist, select from displayed templates.</li>
<li>If no templates exist, click <uicontrol>Create a template</uicontrol> to
create a template.</li>
@@ -73,9 +73,9 @@ create a template.</li>
</cshelp>
<cshelp id="kimhvirtmedit" xml:lang="en-us">
<title>Edit guest</title>
-<shortdesc>Edit the properties of an existing virtual machine. Some
-properties can be edited only while guest is stopped. Others will
-take effect in next boot.</shortdesc>
+<shortdesc>Edit the properties of an existing guest. Some properties
+can be edited only while guest is stopped. Others will take effect
+in next boot.</shortdesc>
<csbody>
<dl><dlentry>
<dt>General</dt>
@@ -124,11 +124,11 @@ guest.</li>
iSCSI volumes or if the target pool does not have enough space, the
clone will be created on a default storage pool. </note></li>
</ol>
-<p>A guest appears in your list with the label "cloning..." When the
-process is complete, the cloned guest is available to use.</p><?Pub
-Caret 54?>
+<p>A guest appears in your list with the label <uicontrol>Cloning...</uicontrol> When
+the process is complete, the cloned guest is available to use.</p><?Pub
+Caret 45?>
</csbody>
</cshelp>
<?tm 1391540919 3?>
</cshelp>
-<?Pub *0000005359?>
+<?Pub *0000005287?>
diff --git a/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita b/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita
index e6f995d..53d1404 100644
--- a/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita
+++ b/ui/pages/help/en_US/storage.dita
@@ -94,16 +94,16 @@ pool is created, it will be created for you.</li>
</cshelp>
<cshelp id="kimhdefstor" xml:lang="en-us">
<title>Add volume</title>
-<shortdesc>Adds volume to a storage pool.</shortdesc><?Pub Caret 0?>
+<shortdesc>Adds volume to a storage pool.</shortdesc>
<csbody>
<dl><dlentry>
<dt>Fetch from remote URL</dt>
-<dd>Specifies a location to upload the volume from. For example: <filepath>https://my-server/fedora22.img</filepath>.</dd>
+<dd>Specifies a location to download the volume from. For example: <filepath>https://my-server/fedora22.img</filepath>.</dd>
</dlentry><dlentry>
<dt>Upload a file</dt>
<dd>Specifies a location on your local system.</dd>
-</dlentry></dl>
+</dlentry></dl><?Pub Caret 57?>
</csbody>
</cshelp>
</cshelp>
-<?Pub *0000004413?>
+<?Pub *0000004416?>
diff --git a/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita b/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita
index 1c03016..ad3747c 100644
--- a/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita
+++ b/ui/pages/help/en_US/templates.dita
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ You can select multiple networks.</dd>
<dd>In the <uicontrol>CPU Number</uicontrol> field, specify the number
of processors that are defined for the template.</dd>
<dd>Select to Manually set CPU topology for each guest.</dd>
-</dlentry></dl><?Pub Caret 322?>
+</dlentry></dl>
</csbody>
</cshelp>
<cshelp id="kimhaddtempl">
@@ -69,16 +69,19 @@ ISO image to 'ISO' storage pool for following discovery.</shortdesc>
<dd>Select to scan storage pools for installation ISO images available
on the system.</dd>
</dlentry><dlentry>
+<dt>Local Image File</dt>
+<dd>Select to specify a path to the local image file.</dd>
+</dlentry><dlentry>
<dt>Remote ISO image</dt>
<dd>Select to specify a remote location for an installation ISO image.</dd>
</dlentry></dl>
</csbody>
</cshelp>
<cshelp id="kimhaddloct">
-<title>Add template - local ISO image</title>
-<shortdesc>Add a template from a local ISO image.</shortdesc>
+<title>Add template - ISO image</title>
+<shortdesc>Add a template from a ISO image.</shortdesc>
<csbody>
-<p>The ISO images available on the system are displayed.</p>
+<p>The ISO images available on the system ore remotely are displayed.</p>
<dl><dlentry>
<dt>OS</dt>
<dd>Name of the operating system or distribution.</dd>
@@ -105,7 +108,7 @@ specify a path to the ISO image.</li>
ISO images.</li>
</ul></li>
</ul>
-</csbody>
+</csbody><?Pub Caret -2?>
</cshelp>
</cshelp>
-<?Pub *0000004089?>
+<?Pub *0000004194?>
--
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