Almost ready to go public

[Ayal Baron]

Looking good.  I have a problem with the fact that there is no agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target audience is.  Without this I believe we will get less attendees.

Spelling/grammar issues:

"Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join in
 launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” project."

s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ ?

"1stth - 3rd"
get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing

s/(source)/(source code)/

s/site, forums/site and forums/

s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/

s/  Open sourcing it's virtualization/  Open sourcing its virtualization/




----- Original Message -----
> 
> 
> All corrected. New PDF uploading
> 
> Carl.
> 
> 
> On 09/19/2011 02:43 PM, Itamar Heim wrote:
> > http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/workshop-invitation/
> >
> > s/Are interested in an Open virtualization management platform?/Are
> > you.../
> > s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already)
> > s/CA,USA/CA, USA/
> >
> > " The project will kickoff with a workshop meeting during (November
> > 1-3rd)"
> > Why parenthesis around the dates?
> >
> >
> > http://lists.ovirt.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Ovirt-WorkShop-Invitatio
> > n.pdf
> > page 1
> > s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already)
> >
> > Page 2
> > s/Vitalization/Virtualization/
> >
> > Page 3
> > s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already)
> >
> > Page 11
> > s/Nogah/oVirt/ (2 occurrences)
> >
> > page 24
> > s/Nogah/oVirt/
> > s/have its/have their/
> >
> > page 25
> > s/are no limit/is no limit/
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: project-planning-bounces at ovirt.org
> > [mailto:project-planning-bounces at ovirt.org] On Behalf Of Carl
> >> Trieloff
> >> Sent: Monday, September 19, 2011 18:39 PM
> >> To: project-planning at ovirt.org
> >> Subject: Almost ready to go public
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> I have updated the website, the PDF invitation and the e-mail
> >> invitation. Please take a quick look and see if my last pass
> >> through fix
> >> ups are good.
> >>
> >> I have shortened the tease on the e-mail invite a little and
> >> posted it
> >> in addition to the PDF on the resources page:
> >> http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/
> >>
> >> The site has been updated with logistics. If we are all good, I'll
> >> sync
> >> with Ralf and we can start turning it public later today.
> >>
> >> Mail out any issues, thx.
> >>
> >> kind regards
> >> Carl.
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