Almost ready to go public

[Ayal Baron]

----- Original Message -----
> On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
> > ----- Original Message -----
> >> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
> >>> Looking good.  I have a problem with the fact that there is no
> >>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target
> >>> audience is.  Without this I believe we will get less attendees.
> >>>
> >>> Spelling/grammar issues:
> >>>
> >>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join
> >>> in
> >>>  launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt”
> >>>  project."
> >>>
> >>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./
> >>> ?
> >>>
> >>> "1stth - 3rd"
> >>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing
> >>>
> >>> s/(source)/(source code)/
> >>>
> >>> s/site, forums/site and forums/
> >>>
> >>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/
> >>>
> >>> s/  Open sourcing it's virtualization/  Open sourcing its
> >>> virtualization/
> >> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it
> >>
> >> Carl.
> >>
> > Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated.
> 
> I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also.
> 
> Carl.
> 

Still older version ("November 1th" etc).