Almost ready to go public

[Carl Trieloff]

On 09/19/2011 05:26 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
>
> ----- Original Message -----
>> On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
>>> ----- Original Message -----
>>>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote:
>>>>> Looking good.  I have a problem with the fact that there is no
>>>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target
>>>>> audience is.  Without this I believe we will get less attendees.
>>>>>
>>>>> Spelling/grammar issues:
>>>>>
>>>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join
>>>>> in
>>>>>  launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt”
>>>>>  project."
>>>>>
>>>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./
>>>>> ?
>>>>>
>>>>> "1stth - 3rd"
>>>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing
>>>>>
>>>>> s/(source)/(source code)/
>>>>>
>>>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/
>>>>>
>>>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/
>>>>>
>>>>> s/  Open sourcing it's virtualization/  Open sourcing its
>>>>> virtualization/
>>>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it
>>>>
>>>> Carl.
>>>>
>>> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated.
>> I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also.
>>
>> Carl.
>>
> Still older version ("November 1th" etc).


try now.

Carl.