website access. lists.ovirt.org username: ovirtstaging password: 1zGn48XEZPHFe This will be dropped and moved to www. from list. when we go live. Carl. On 09/19/2011 11:38 AM, Carl Trieloff wrote: > > I have updated the website, the PDF invitation and the e-mail > invitation. Please take a quick look and see if my last pass through fix > ups are good. > > I have shortened the tease on the e-mail invite a little and posted it > in addition to the PDF on the resources page: > http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/ > > The site has been updated with logistics. If we are all good, I'll sync > with Ralf and we can start turning it public later today. > > Mail out any issues, thx. > > kind regards > Carl. > _______________________________________________ > Project-planning mailing list > Project-planning(a)ovirt.org > http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/project-planning _______________________________________________ Project-planning mailing list Project-planning(a)ovirt.org http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/project-planning

Carl: In the PDF file, please correct "San Hose" to be "San Jose".

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Trieloff Sent: Monday, September 19, 2011 18:39 PM To: project-planning(a)ovirt.org Subject: Almost ready to go public I have updated the website, the PDF invitation and the e-mail invitation. Please take a quick look and see if my last pass through fix ups are good. I have shortened the tease on the e-mail invite a little and posted it in addition to the PDF on the resources page: http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/ The site has been updated with logistics. If we are all good, I'll sync with Ralf and we can start turning it public later today. Mail out any issues, thx. kind regards Carl. _______________________________________________ Project-planning mailing list Project-planning(a)ovirt.org http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/project-planning

All corrected. New PDF uploading Carl. On 09/19/2011 02:43 PM, Itamar Heim wrote: > http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/workshop-invitation/ > > s/Are interested in an Open virtualization management platform?/Are > you.../ > s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already) > s/CA,USA/CA, USA/ > > " The project will kickoff with a workshop meeting during (November > 1-3rd)" > Why parenthesis around the dates? > > > http://lists.ovirt.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Ovirt-WorkShop-Invitatio > n.pdf > page 1 > s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already) > > Page 2 > s/Vitalization/Virtualization/ > > Page 3 > s/San Hose/San Jose/ (mentioned already) > > Page 11 > s/Nogah/oVirt/ (2 occurrences) > > page 24 > s/Nogah/oVirt/ > s/have its/have their/ > > page 25 > s/are no limit/is no limit/ > > > > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: project-planning-bounces(a)ovirt.org > [mailto:project-planning-bounces@ovirt.org] On Behalf Of Carl >> Trieloff >> Sent: Monday, September 19, 2011 18:39 PM >> To: project-planning(a)ovirt.org >> Subject: Almost ready to go public >> >> >> >> I have updated the website, the PDF invitation and the e-mail >> invitation. Please take a quick look and see if my last pass >> through fix >> ups are good. >> >> I have shortened the tease on the e-mail invite a little and >> posted it >> in addition to the PDF on the resources page: >> http://lists.ovirt.org/project/resources/ >> >> The site has been updated with logistics. If we are all good, I'll >> sync >> with Ralf and we can start turning it public later today. >> >> Mail out any issues, thx. >> >> kind regards >> Carl. >> _______________________________________________ >> Project-planning mailing list >> Project-planning(a)ovirt.org >> http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/project-planning _______________________________________________ Project-planning mailing list Project-planning(a)ovirt.org http://lists.ovirt.org/mailman/listinfo/project-planning

Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target audience is. Without this I believe we will get less attendees. Spelling/grammar issues: "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join in launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” project." s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ ? "1stth - 3rd" get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing s/(source)/(source code)/ s/site, forums/site and forums/ s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its virtualization/

----- Original Message ----- > On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no >> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target >> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less attendees. >> >> Spelling/grammar issues: >> >> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join in >> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” project." >> >> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ ? >> >> "1stth - 3rd" >> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing >> >> s/(source)/(source code)/ >> >> s/site, forums/site and forums/ >> >> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ >> >> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its >> virtualization/ > I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it > > Carl. > Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated.

----- Original Message ----- > On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >> ----- Original Message ----- >>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no >>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target >>>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less attendees. >>>> >>>> Spelling/grammar issues: >>>> >>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to join >>>> in >>>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” >>>> project." >>>> >>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" project./ >>>> ? >>>> >>>> "1stth - 3rd" >>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing >>>> >>>> s/(source)/(source code)/ >>>> >>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/ >>>> >>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ >>>> >>>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its >>>> virtualization/ >>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate it >>> >>> Carl. >>> >> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated. > I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also. > > Carl. > Still older version ("November 1th" etc).

----- Original Message ----- > On 09/19/2011 05:26 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >> ----- Original Message ----- >>> On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>> ----- Original Message ----- >>>>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>>>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is no >>>>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the target >>>>>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less >>>>>> attendees. >>>>>> >>>>>> Spelling/grammar issues: >>>>>> >>>>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to >>>>>> join >>>>>> in >>>>>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” >>>>>> project." >>>>>> >>>>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" >>>>>> project./ >>>>>> ? >>>>>> >>>>>> "1stth - 3rd" >>>>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing >>>>>> >>>>>> s/(source)/(source code)/ >>>>>> >>>>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/ >>>>>> >>>>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ >>>>>> >>>>>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its >>>>>> virtualization/ >>>>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate >>>>> it >>>>> >>>>> Carl. >>>>> >>>> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated. >>> I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also. >>> >>> Carl. >>> >> Still older version ("November 1th" etc). > > try now. It's corrupt now (256b instead of ~200K)

----- Original Message ----- > On 09/19/2011 05:34 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: > > > > ----- Original Message ----- > >> On 09/19/2011 05:26 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: > >>> ----- Original Message ----- > >>>> On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: > >>>>> ----- Original Message ----- > >>>>>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: > >>>>>>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is > >>>>>>> no > >>>>>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the > >>>>>>> target > >>>>>>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less > >>>>>>> attendees. > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> Spelling/grammar issues: > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to > >>>>>>> join > >>>>>>> in > >>>>>>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” > >>>>>>> project." > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" > >>>>>>> project./ > >>>>>>> ? > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> "1stth - 3rd" > >>>>>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> s/(source)/(source code)/ > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/ > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ > >>>>>>> > >>>>>>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its > >>>>>>> virtualization/ > >>>>>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not > >>>>>> locate > >>>>>> it > >>>>>> > >>>>>> Carl. > >>>>>> > >>>>> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated. > >>>> I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also. > >>>> > >>>> Carl. > >>>> > >>> Still older version ("November 1th" etc). > >> > >> try now. > > It's corrupt now (256b instead of ~200K) > > > > it's good for me, try do a page refresh and then a download so you > get > the updates html source link > > Carl. > http://www.ovirt.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Ovirt-WorkShop-Invitation... ???? (still broken for me)

----- Original Message ----- > On 09/19/2011 05:34 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >> ----- Original Message ----- >>> On 09/19/2011 05:26 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>> ----- Original Message ----- >>>>> On 09/19/2011 05:08 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>>>> ----- Original Message ----- >>>>>>> On 09/19/2011 04:01 PM, Ayal Baron wrote: >>>>>>>> Looking good. I have a problem with the fact that there is >>>>>>>> no >>>>>>>> agenda which makes it really hard to understand who the >>>>>>>> target >>>>>>>> audience is. Without this I believe we will get less >>>>>>>> attendees. >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> Spelling/grammar issues: >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> "Cisco, IBM, Intel, NetApp, Red Hat, and SUSE invite you to >>>>>>>> join >>>>>>>> in >>>>>>>> launching a fully open virtualization management “oVirt” >>>>>>>> project." >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> s/management “oVirt” project./management - the "oVirt" >>>>>>>> project./ >>>>>>>> ? >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> "1stth - 3rd" >>>>>>>> get rid of redundant "th" and fix "st" placing >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> s/(source)/(source code)/ >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> s/site, forums/site and forums/ >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> s/November 1th - 3rd/November 1st - 3rd/ >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> s/ Open sourcing it's virtualization/ Open sourcing its >>>>>>>> virtualization/ >>>>>>> I believe I got them all except the last one, could not locate >>>>>>> it >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Carl. >>>>>>> >>>>>> Have you uploaded the pdf? it doesn't seem to be updated. >>>>> I'll try again, I had that issue with the one png also. >>>>> >>>>> Carl. >>>>> >>>> Still older version ("November 1th" etc). >>> try now. >> It's corrupt now (256b instead of ~200K) >> > it's good for me, try do a page refresh and then a download so you > get > the updates html source link > > Carl. > http://www.ovirt.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Ovirt-WorkShop-Invitation... ???? (still broken for me)

"Open sourcing it's virtualization" s/it's/its/ This is under page 8: "Building an Open 'Development' Community"